Sunday, 20 February 2011

VISUAL LANGUAGE - BOOK WORKS - STOCK - Evaluate

Issues
Still to much negative space
Am I cutting out window panes or not?
Looks messy and unprofessional
Is it cost worthy?
Red lines relevant?

Action to be taken
Needs to be crafted with more care
Use a bone to fold
Dont cut out window panes.
Do a few small illustrations to fill negative space
Use thinner red lines and cover more space - for aesthetic quality.

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