Crit - Issues and Actions!

Issues Raised:

• Doesn't read to well
• Certain Letters don't look like capitals
• Letters H and I are to simular
• Badge - not legible
• Logic - to curls - Why are they placed where they are?

Action to be taken:

• To experiment with lowercase
• Apply logic to curls - place where serifs would be?
• Re-work H, M and N
• Logistics - Find another font with serifs, use as guidline to where curls should be placed.
• Write a series of words with typeface rather than just one